Questions and Answers
What inspired “Mourner”?
“Mourner” was written for an acquaintance whose wife died without warning. The shock of her loss was a wake-up call that he too, like all of us, was standing on the edge of mortality and could be snatched from this earth at any time. He also had to suffer knowing it was too late to say the good things to her that he should have, long before.
What poetic techniques did you use in “Mourner”?
The poem is built on the image of a volcanic vent to express the intensity of the husband’s combined fear, grief, and remorse. I used near rhyme (“eyes … reminds”; “down … long … gone”) and internal rhyme (“thins … skin”) to build harmony. I made the lines uneven in length to reflect the mourner’s emotional turmoil.